Saturday, December 17, 2011

Can you correct the paragraph to make it better?

Secondly the team being students would have a special interest to learn about the problem, relate it with their own life experiences, and provide greater devotion and effectiveness towards the research. Thirdly, combining all the knowledge from our primary and secondary research, our team will be able to answer our research question “Is depression related to student’s behavior at the PI?” and consequently provide some useful recommendations that can benefit people in managing depression if it was to be implemented.

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